Friday, March 5, 2010
Free Response 1
Project two was sort of boring. I am not creative so the creative aspect of the project was not fun for me, and it probably looks terrible and might not even make sense for the rest of the project. I also do not like writing too much so I always rush myself to get it done the first time around so i suppose the peer review is helpful to have me look over my work before I just turn it in for whatever grade my rushed work would give me. Project two was a little more difficult than project one because it wasn't just about our lives it was having to have a strong point backing up our work. I'm pretty sure i will get a lower grade on project two than on one because when i was writing two it seemed really repetitive and even the person that looked over mine said it was. I tried to find a way to change it but I couldn't think of any other way to make my point strong and to make sure it was fully backed up seemed as though I thought that the picture slideshow was the best medium to choose. It definitely isn't but it was the least creative choice that I could actually handle and do so I guess I'll find out how bad it was when I get it back with my grade.
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Matt -
ReplyDeleteThis is specific and relevant to issues of today's class, so you've done a good job following the model of a good free response post.
As far as the content of your post, I don't think you are alone in your concerns. However, that being said, please be aware that I am not lying when I say I would be more than happy to work with you on any issues of your writing if you bring it to my attention before the deadlines for the course. As my goal for this course is to give you any chance possible to improve your writing, I can't help but view these kinds of concerns as a missed opportunity to approach the writing process in a helpful way.
- Garth Sabo